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Seem this headwriter does focus on one story when it gets to ballooning, while other characters virtually disappear from sight, not even a mention.
Look at now.....We are at the cop shop, there has been a shooting of a major character, and we don't see Lani or Eli for even 10 seconds. (after all, not many cops at that station, lol)
Doug, Julie & Chloe will be hosting the reception at their club, but...no sign of any of them when they should be there making sure everything is in order. Guests would already be arriving there, would they not? Hey, don't mind, as there is good story telling/acting going on......but....yes, perhaps instead of 15 min devoted to Paul explaining events to Will, 2 minutes could have been used for some side stuff.
Look at now.....We are at the cop shop, there has been a shooting of a major character, and we don't see Lani or Eli for even 10 seconds. (after all, not many cops at that station, lol)
Doug, Julie & Chloe will be hosting the reception at their club, but...no sign of any of them when they should be there making sure everything is in order. Guests would already be arriving there, would they not? Hey, don't mind, as there is good story telling/acting going on......but....yes, perhaps instead of 15 min devoted to Paul explaining events to Will, 2 minutes could have been used for some side stuff.