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Hospital (establishing shot, night), Paulina's room - Abe is at Paulina's bedside. Chanel and Lani come in. Paulina's not doing well. The girls try to relieve Abe, he wants to be here when she wakes up. They talk about how dismal, dire, and dreadful her situation is. Paulina comes to and asks about the babies. They show her a drawing the twins made for her. She asks Chanel about more grandbabies. Chanel laughs that she and Johnny just married. Paulina says if she doesn't make it, tell them about me.
Brewery (establishing shot, night), Tank - Wendy worries when they'll run out of air. Tripp says they'll probably die of carbon dioxide poisoning. Wendy wants to know the truth. They discuss how they should breathe to preserve oxygen. Wendy knows they'll be OK because they're together. She asks if he believes in God? He seems neutral on the subject but has noted that patients of different faiths seem to be comforted by that.
Brewery, Tank, continued - Wendy talks about her religious beliefs (sounds like someone read a text about all the religions of China and mixed them together). Tripp is sorry she's in this mess because of him. They won't be able to leave messages for their families (nothing to write with). The Shins and Ava have already lost a son, now they'll lose another child. They lament the mundane tasks they had scheduled for today or were putting off. They talk about marriage and exchange vows.
Salem Airfield (with a nifty sign) - John and Steve are looking in the distance as Ava paces. "There she is," the boys say. Ava hopes this works.
Somewhere - Two thugs move tanks. One tank says "Ammonia" and one says "Bleach." They knock them over, open them, and run.
Prison, Clyde's cell - An alarm goes off. Later, his cell door is open. Steve and John, dressed in hazmat suits, stop him from running. Later, Clyde has a suit and they walk out with him.
Hospital, Paulina's room - Paulina feels weaker. She thinks she's slipping away; Abe won't let her go. Later in the waiting area, Chanel talks about all Paulina's gone through to die this way, and Lani talks about growing up and not knowing everything her strong Aunt Paulina had gone through. She laments the pain she caused Paulina when the truth came out. They both lament how their kids will grow up not knowing Paulina.
Salem Airfield - John, Steve, and Clyde have arrived where Ava stands with the thugs. Clyde won't reveal the location of Tripp yet. Ava threatens him, he backtalks her. Ava and the goons pull out guns. Ava tells "the boys" they're going to do this her way.
Hospital, Paulina's room - Abe weeps at Paulina's side. He thanks her for the best years of his life, which he wishes he could remember. They need to make more memories, etc. Similar circular conversations occur out in the waiting room as Chanel worries Paulina will know she was crying, etc. Back in the room, Abe takes Paulina's hand and a bright light is on her as the camera pans up toward the ceiling.
Salem Airfield - Ava tells John and Steve this is where they get off this ride. She dispatches her thugs to take John and Steve "back to Salem". Clyde appreciates Ava's moves but doesn't trust her. He'll call her when he's in the air. Ava levels her gun again.
Edge of the Square Area - Steve and John are still at gunpoint talking about Ava's double-cross. They talk about how this happened on the Chicago case. Only one goon is with them.
Salem Airfield - Clyde taunts Ava that if he dies, Tripp dies. Ava lowers the gun toward his private parts. She demands to know where Tripp is. Goldman intercepts her and takes the gun. She likes Clyde's parts as they are (please take a moment to expel vomit, I know I needed it).
Hospital - A figure dressed like a nurse walks in and we only see her from the back. Abe and Paulina appear to be stunned.
Brewery Tank - Tripp and Wendy are running out of air. Wendy asks Tripp if they can get married when they're out of here? Tripp promises they will.
Edge of the Square Area - A car pulls up, the other goon gets out. John and Steve rush the goons.
Salem Airfield - Goldman and Clyde kiss. Clyde isn't getting in the airplane because its pilot works for Ava. They leave her. Ava vows to slit his throat after hunting him down. Goldman hangs back a second to tell Ava that she made sure Tripp was good and dead before she slithers off. Ava screams. END
Brewery (establishing shot, night), Tank - Wendy worries when they'll run out of air. Tripp says they'll probably die of carbon dioxide poisoning. Wendy wants to know the truth. They discuss how they should breathe to preserve oxygen. Wendy knows they'll be OK because they're together. She asks if he believes in God? He seems neutral on the subject but has noted that patients of different faiths seem to be comforted by that.
Brewery, Tank, continued - Wendy talks about her religious beliefs (sounds like someone read a text about all the religions of China and mixed them together). Tripp is sorry she's in this mess because of him. They won't be able to leave messages for their families (nothing to write with). The Shins and Ava have already lost a son, now they'll lose another child. They lament the mundane tasks they had scheduled for today or were putting off. They talk about marriage and exchange vows.
Salem Airfield (with a nifty sign) - John and Steve are looking in the distance as Ava paces. "There she is," the boys say. Ava hopes this works.
Somewhere - Two thugs move tanks. One tank says "Ammonia" and one says "Bleach." They knock them over, open them, and run.
Prison, Clyde's cell - An alarm goes off. Later, his cell door is open. Steve and John, dressed in hazmat suits, stop him from running. Later, Clyde has a suit and they walk out with him.
Hospital, Paulina's room - Paulina feels weaker. She thinks she's slipping away; Abe won't let her go. Later in the waiting area, Chanel talks about all Paulina's gone through to die this way, and Lani talks about growing up and not knowing everything her strong Aunt Paulina had gone through. She laments the pain she caused Paulina when the truth came out. They both lament how their kids will grow up not knowing Paulina.
Salem Airfield - John, Steve, and Clyde have arrived where Ava stands with the thugs. Clyde won't reveal the location of Tripp yet. Ava threatens him, he backtalks her. Ava and the goons pull out guns. Ava tells "the boys" they're going to do this her way.
Hospital, Paulina's room - Abe weeps at Paulina's side. He thanks her for the best years of his life, which he wishes he could remember. They need to make more memories, etc. Similar circular conversations occur out in the waiting room as Chanel worries Paulina will know she was crying, etc. Back in the room, Abe takes Paulina's hand and a bright light is on her as the camera pans up toward the ceiling.
Salem Airfield - Ava tells John and Steve this is where they get off this ride. She dispatches her thugs to take John and Steve "back to Salem". Clyde appreciates Ava's moves but doesn't trust her. He'll call her when he's in the air. Ava levels her gun again.
Edge of the Square Area - Steve and John are still at gunpoint talking about Ava's double-cross. They talk about how this happened on the Chicago case. Only one goon is with them.
Salem Airfield - Clyde taunts Ava that if he dies, Tripp dies. Ava lowers the gun toward his private parts. She demands to know where Tripp is. Goldman intercepts her and takes the gun. She likes Clyde's parts as they are (please take a moment to expel vomit, I know I needed it).
Hospital - A figure dressed like a nurse walks in and we only see her from the back. Abe and Paulina appear to be stunned.
Brewery Tank - Tripp and Wendy are running out of air. Wendy asks Tripp if they can get married when they're out of here? Tripp promises they will.
Edge of the Square Area - A car pulls up, the other goon gets out. John and Steve rush the goons.
Salem Airfield - Goldman and Clyde kiss. Clyde isn't getting in the airplane because its pilot works for Ava. They leave her. Ava vows to slit his throat after hunting him down. Goldman hangs back a second to tell Ava that she made sure Tripp was good and dead before she slithers off. Ava screams. END
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