Truth and Consequences

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Sparkster

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Hey, everybody! I've written a story for the Writer's Bench here at the Spectator. This is my first time at this so I hope you enjoy it! I will be posting episodes between 8-10am daily. I will be out of town for work next week but I should be able to still post.

ENJOY!

TRUTH AND CONSEQUENCES

Brady Pub

Nicole is sitting at the bar sipping on a martini, scrolling through pictures on her phone. She comes across a picture of Sydney. A smile comes to her face. She thinks of how much she misses her.
Nicole: Quit deluding yourself, Nic, move on!
She flips over to her Facebook account, scrolling through the status updates. She hears someone come up behind her.
Melanie: Checking out how many “likes” Locker Room Lolita is getting? Or maybe you’re plotting to steal another baby? Or I know, maybe you’re making up more stories to cover for that b*tch of a stepmother of mine?
Nicole: Listen here, you little twit, you oughtta get your facts straight before you go spouting off at the mouth.
Melanie: What, like you weren’t a porn star?
Nicole: No, I wasn’t. And I am sick to death of everyone in this town saying that as if I was a willing participant! My sorry excuse for a father drugged me and forced me into it. I was quite young and didn’t have much choice in the matter. Come to think of it, you and I have a lot in common regarding our upbringing, not to mention that I also was abused by Trent. But you wouldn’t know that because you’re too caught up in your own little world about little miss Melanie and making everyone’s business your own. It’s not all about you! Get over yourself.
Nicole grabs her purse and gets up to leave.
Melanie: Geez, what a b*tch!
Nicole turns around.
Nicole: You know, let me offer a little bit of advice. Calling every woman you can’t stand a “b*tch” is not doing you any favors in the friend department. I wonder what your precious Maggie would think of that? Oh that’s right, she’s your only female friend now that Arianna is gone.
Nicole walks out of the Pub. Melanie takes a seat on a barstool.
Melanie: I don’t think Maggie would mind my calling you that, Nicole. She doesn’t like you anyway and is just too nice to use that word.

The Park

Sami and Rafe are sitting on Benchie watching Johnny, Allie, and Sydney play on the jungle gym.
Sami: Sydney, stay close to your brother so I can keep an eye on you.
Sydney: What about Allie?
Sami: Oh, yeah, and your sister too.
Sydney: Ok, Sami!
Sydney goes trotting off with Johnny and Allie.
Sami: Unbelievable. Do you think she’ll ever view me as her mother? It’s kind of embarrassing to have your child calling you by your first name.
Rafe: Relax, she knows you’re her mother. She’s at that age where she repeats everything. She probably just hears me calling you Sami.
Sami: Yeah, I suppose.
Just then Nicole comes around the corner and sees the kids playing. She has a pained smile on her face as she watches Sydney go happily down the slide laughing the whole way down. She remembers back to her time with Sydney, realizing how much Sydney has grown up since then. Click on the link to see what Nicole is remembering: (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETa8K5ZcC94&feature=related) Nicole eyes Sami and Rafe and decides she better leave.
Sydney: Mommy!

To be continued tomorrow....
 
Great start Sparky! Just loved the confrontation between Melanie and Nicole.

I'm thinking that Rafe should start to call Sami "Mommy" so that Sydney will follow suit. Mostly I can't believe that Sami is spending any time with her children!

Thanks for the story. Looking forward to more!
 
Boy what a great start. Looking foreward to tomorrow. Sami's reaction should be something to see that Sydney called Nicole Mommy. Thanks Sparkster.
 
Yay Sydney!! Why does everyone in Salem act like Nicole being in porn is such a horrible thing anyway, it's not illegal, unlike prostitution (Kate) and stealing (Melanie). Good to see Nicole standing up for herself about that finally. Very good start, Sparkster!!
 
Thanks for the comments everyone! I'm glad you liked the first episode. I will be posting a new episode each day, including weekends. The story has gotten a bit longer than I thought it would so I decided to include weekends to get through it quicker (thanks kpatch :))

Here's what's coming up this week:

Tuesday: The Right Place At The Right Time
Wednesday: Nutburgers
Thursday: Welcome back to Salem
Friday: Nicole's Dream
Saturday: My two Dads
Sunday: Surprise Visit
 
Whooo hoo no more Friday cliffhangers? LOL
THanks Sparkster. Great start and I am very anxious to read tomorrow's episode!
 
The Park

Sydney: Mommy!
Sami: Yes, sweetheart-
Sami’s smile soon turns to a look of horror and disgust as she sees Sydney go taking off across the park and throwing herself into a startled Nicole’s arms. Sami tells Rafe to stay with Johnny and Allie while she takes off after Sydney.
Nicole: Oh, my! Hi there Sydney!
Sami: Get your filthy little hands off my daughter!
Nicole: Sami, I didn’t mean to-
Sami: No, of course not, Nicole. You never just mean to do anything.
Sami scoops up Sydney in her arms and walks back toward Rafe. Sydney has a sad look on her face.
Sydney: Bye, Mommy.
Sami: No, honey. She’s not your mommy. I’m your mommy. I’m so sorry you’re so confused. It’ll be ok. I promise.

The Pier

Later that day, Sami and EJ are at the pier arguing over custody arrangements and the upcoming hearing.
EJ: You know damn well you can’t keep me from my children forever! The court hearing is only a few days away and I am certain they will rule in my favor.
Sami: What, did ya have Fatha pay off the judge?
EJ: I really doubt a judge is going to give custody to a psychotic b*tch who tried to murder her children’s father.
Sami (shaking her head): It still amazes me that a bullet to the brain didn’t kill you. Besides, you have no proof of that. I, however, do have proof that you kidnapped Sydney and made everyone think she was dead!
Nicole has now walked up.
EJ: She’s not even yours!

To be continued....

P.S. I almost had a minor meltdown this morning. My husband has been trying to fix our wireless connection...of course it worked last night when he "fixed" it. Then this morning it didn't work...I was like, "NO, I gotta post my story!!" After a few restarts and directly connecting to the modem again, here we are! :) Would be nice to be wireless again though....grrrrrr! :mad:
 
What does EJ mean "she's not even yours"??? I am excited about what's next! Thanks for the chapter Sparky.

I will be posting a new episode each day, including weekends. The story has gotten a bit longer than I thought it would so I decided to include weekends to get through it quicker (thanks kpatch :))

Oh thank god someone will be posting on weekends. I hate those Writers Bench writers who only work Monday - Friday. Lazy good-for-nothings. What's up with that anyway? :)
 
LOL kpatch!
Your stories are worth the wait :)

Sparkster, I am loving it so far! Cannot WAIT to read more! :clap:
 
MMmmm, I'm liking the direction this is going Sparkster - very excited!!!:clap:

LOL Kpatch, we love you anyway.:)
 
Sparkster,,you have "sparked" my interest! I'm loving this story! Great job on the Nicole/Melanie confrontation! I can totally see that conversation play out in my head! Love'd it!

So....if Sydney isn't Sami's are we safe to assume that you are implying it's Nicole! Geez...I hope the actual writers for DOOL take your lead on this! Makes for a fab storyline!

Thank you Sparkster!!! Looking forward to your next chapter! :) :)
 
Oh I loved that line. Bet that creep EJ knew her parentage the whole time!

Not to worry kpatch...I'm sure that once Sparkster has a few stories under her belt, and we start making more and more demands for more and more stories she'll probably need to take weekends off too. :)
 
What a treat to find a new story here at the world famous "Writer's Bench". Great start sparkster... I also am wondering what EJ means by "she's not even yours"??? Looking forward to tomorrow and the next great chapter.
 
What does EJ mean "she's not even yours"??? I am excited about what's next! Thanks for the chapter Sparky.

Guess you'll just have to tune in to find out, eh? :wink:

Oh thank god someone will be posting on weekends. I hate those Writers Bench writers who only work Monday - Friday. Lazy good-for-nothings. What's up with that anyway? :)

Not to worry kpatch...I'm sure that once Sparkster has a few stories under her belt, and we start making more and more demands for more and more stories she'll probably need to take weekends off too. :)

:clap: You gals are silly! I was worried my story would be too long and drag out forever, causing interest to wane, so kpatch suggested I post on weekends. So I will, and I plan to post while I'm out of town too, unlike some writers I know! :wink: And AtD, how about Sparkster gets one story under her belt before we start demanding more, alright?! :D
 
Come om Sparky, admit it, you write fiction in real life... This is SOOOO good!! I can't wait to read more!

And you know how much I "hate" cliffhangers... :smile: (no, not really.. I keed, I keed)
 
Hey, I was not talking about me. Ask kpatch I am never demanding, am I kpatch? kpatch? :D:D:D
 
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